Blog- Artful writing

I think I just figured out what kind of writing I want for my Blog.  Read below of Helanius’ work Trigger.  This writing is what I wrote in Kate’s class.  I thought the Blog was more diary writing, notes for me as an artist to refer to later. But I appreciate both.  For now on I will write diary notes first, my intial personal response, then I'll attempt to write a more artful comment, the kind of writing one might find in a dance review.

“The dancers moved through contemporary movements without abandoning themselves. The movement was their voice, not arbitrary actions laid upon them. The intricate vocabulary brought interest beyond pedestrian, taking the audience from real to artful, adding richness for the eye.”