Asher told me to do some editing, take out everything except for what I am willing to fight for. This was just what I needed to hear.
Maida mentioned- adding another animal, ballet section?
Helanius- go back to why you wanted to do this piece in the first place.
Added River and Sky walking across during the sounding section holding a banner saying "We are all one family." I'll bring it on Wed and we will see how it works.
Notes from watching the video, after the rehearsal.
Try walking in like wolves again, during wolf sounds, then drinking water, then sit back then howl. then wolves sound fade, then music begins as we begin CI
1) beginning seciton needs to move along quicker, less CI go into finding hands, get rid of pauses
2) less suspensions for jen on fast section
3) brian don't look up when you jump over me-
4) talking section, brian shows impulse to chase and that is when i run, brian, go a little faster,
on diagonal let brian do two things to me, not just one, he grabs me and that is what brings me into that lift around his head.
4) Brian doesn't sound just rolls, just jen sounds. longer diagonal for that to develop
5) Brian pets first
6) lifting seciton nice, brian has to initate all the lifts
7) jen only pets at end, not brian,
8) no howling at end, maybe brian howls in silence
Jen